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Reading in an Electronic Age

People are reading as much now in the electronic age as possible. But it is a different kind of reading. People have less time for book-reading. Although they still read books, they want the books to move faster. So they choose to read the hypertexts instead of linear texts. A hypertext contains many segments of linear text. Hypertexts also contain links to other hypertexts, enabling readers to easily explore other relevant materials if they choose. Even public libraries need to lend text discs and text readers rather than books.

However, these new developments will lead to problems. One of the first problems is that a lot of articles on the Internet are not verified, so there are a few mistakes which will mislead readers. Thus the hypertexts are not so reliable or responsible to the readers as regular books. In addition, some websites are not permitted by the presses but they post the articles to the Internet, consequently, it will ca

People are reading as much now in the electronic age as possible.
第一句无语法错误，但是建议重新组织，例如：
“In this age of Informational Technology, people are reading as much as possible.”

But it is a different kind of reading. People have less time for book-reading. Although they still read books, they want the books to move faster.
这个书籍"move"的动词不通，不知道你想表达什么。

So they choose to read the hypertexts instead of linear texts.
什么叫 linear texts? 线性文字？是不是 written text？

A hypertext contains many segments of linear text. Hypertexts also contain links to other hypertexts, enabling readers to easily explore other relevant materials if they choose. Even public libraries need to lend text discs and text readers rather than books.
为什么说公共图书馆“需要”这么做呢？难道不是已经在实施了吗？另外 text discs and text readers 不太清楚，直接写 "electronic books on CDs" (光盘上的电子书)之类的好了。

However, these new developments will lead to problems.
已经被实施的技术，不要用未来式。用现在时。